My narrative about a island

Once upon a time' there was one boy and to girl. That's what to visit in Ireland and there name was. Jack and Brie and Nikki So they pick their stuff up. Like a chilly bin and two cans of spaghetti So They went to the Ireland. And Sleep there for overnight next day woke up. And the boat was gone so they Wanted to live there After five years. A helicopter game and they were yelled for help eventually. They came back to home and that was their story The end.

 

kia pai te kotahi

Dmic blog post week 1

for maths we did dmic  we all talked what's healthy or  not

Fix the Mistakes